Writing Award Guidelines and Winners

The Composition Program honors excellent undergraduate writing created in its classes by awarding cash prizes to winners of the Ossip Award for Excellence in Seminar in Composition or the Award for Excellence in Public and Professional Writing Courses. 

Each year’s panel of judges looks for thoughtfully crafted essays that explore a subject’s complexity.

To showcase both the range and the quality of work valued by the Composition Program, prize-winning essays from recent years are published here with permission of the student authors (who retain copyright to their work). Each essay is accompanied by commentary from the judges, highlighting what they considered award worthy. It should be noted that most contest winners were first-year students at the time of writing and that papers were not revised or edited for web publication. The essays are not being offered as models of perfected student writing nor as templates for a successful paper; they represent outstanding achievement by students who submitted their work to the writing contest for each academic year.

The submission deadline for Summer 2023 or Fall 2023 Term courses is December 31, 2023; for Spring 2024 Term courses, May 31, 2024. 

If you would like to compete, please see the current contest guidelines (.doc).

 

The 2022 Composition Program Writing Awards

OSSIP AWARDS FOR EXCELLENCE IN SEMINAR IN COMPOSITION

FIRST PRIZE (tie)

“Where Are They?”

Writer: Audrey Schroeder

Instructor: Devon Pham

Seminar in Composition

FIRST PRIZE (tie)

“Splattered Lifeblood and Spilling Ink”

Writer: Phoebe Wilcox

Instructor: JC Lee

First Year Seminar: Writing on Art and the Body 

 

SECOND PRIZE

 “Reexamining an ‘Inspirational Movie'"

Writer: Morgan Polen

Instructor: Ellen Smith

Seminar in Composition: Disability Studies

 

AWARDS FOR EXCELLENCE IN ADVANCED COMPOSITION

FIRST PRIZE

“Productivity: A Relentless Pursuit”

Writer: Taylor Roche

Instructor: Samuel Pittman

Critical Writing

 

SECOND PRIZE

 “My Mother’s Daughter”

Writer: Ebonee Rice-Nguyen

Instructor: JC Lee

The Art of the Essay

 

THIRD PRIZE

 “A Body of Knowledge”

Writer: Lynn Priestly

Instructor: Samuel Pittman

Introduction to Disability Studies 

 

HONORABLE MENTION

“The Case for a Hawaiian Olympic Surfing Team”

Writer: Zoe Thistle

Instructor: Maureen Gallagher

Writing Arguments

The 2021 Composition Program Writing Awards

OSSIP AWARDS FOR EXCELLENCE IN SEMINAR IN COMPOSITION

FIRST PRIZE

Crumbs Tumbling Off the Whole

Writer: Harmony Arungwa

Instructor: Angela Farkas

 

SECOND PRIZE

The Release

Writer: Yunge Xiao

Instructor: JC Lee

 

THIRD PRIZE

The Hypocrisy of Motherhood

Writer: Sarah Barnes

Instructor: Ellen Smith

 

AWARDS FOR EXCELLENCE IN ADVANCED COMPOSITION

FIRST PRIZE

Proxy Wars in the Classroom: Global English as Euphemistic Linguicism

Writer: Mackenzie DeVita

Instructor: Marylou Gramm

History and Politics of the English Language

 

SECOND PRIZE

What's Hair Got to Do with It?

Writer: Stacey Kern

 

Instructor: Jordan Hayes

Writing Arguments

 

THIRD PRIZE

Idiot or Bitch: A Woman's 'Would You Rather'

Writer: Elizabeth Prall

Instructor: Marylou Gramm

History and Politics of the English Language

 

THIRD PRIZE

Powdered Sugar Skies

Writer: Emily KunkoThe 2019 Composition Program Writing Awards  

Instructor: JC Lee

The Art of the Essay

The 2019 Composition Program Writing Awards

Ossip Awards for Excellence in Seminar in Composition

First Prize 

Consider Humans and Pets

Writer: Trezalka Budinsky

Instructor: Angela Farkas

 

Second Prize 

A Discussion of the Social Determinants of the Health of the Chican@ People

Writer: Charles Murphey

Instructor: Nelesi Rodriguez

 

Second Prize 

Breaking the Barriers, an Impossible Dream?

Writer: Alice Tang

Instructor: Joshua Graber

 

Awards for Excellence in Advanced Composition

First Prize 

The US Immigration Debate: Nationalism, Rhetoric, and the Wall

Writer: Lucia Giordano

Instructor: Beth Matway

History and Politics of the English Language

 

First Prize 

Fighting for Air

Writer: Sara Issacs

Instructor: Stephanie Kane-Mainier

Critical Writing

 

Honorable Mention

Your Language is Wrong: Linguistic Discrimination and the Education of Africa

Writer: Christina Potenza

Instructor: Beth Matway

History and Politics of the English LanguageThe 2018 Composition Program Writing Awards  

The 2018 Composition Program Writing Awards

Ossip Awards for Excellence in Seminar in Composition

First Prize 

Gestation as a Gatekeeper in the Case of the Black Slave Narrative

Writer: Nektarios Kasamias 

Instructor: Samuel Corfman 

 

Second Prize 

Ripples Become Tides

Writer: Lauren Chronister

Instructor: Ifeoma Amobi

 

Second Prize 

The Walls Spoke to Me! 

An Exploration of Where I Go When I’m Sad 

Writer: Maya Iliff

Instructor: Robin Clarke

 

Third Prize 

In Writers We Trust? 

Writer: Erin Lalli 

Instructor: Daniel Kubis 

 

 

Awards for Excellence in Advanced Composition

First Prize 

The Language of Women

Writer: Jake Doughman

Instructor: Beth Matway

History and Politics of the English Language

 

First Prize 

On the Language of the Alt-Right

Writer: Kenan Meral 

Instructor: Beth Matway

History and Politics of the English Language 

The 2017 Composition Program Writing Awards

Ossip Award for Excellence in Seminar in Composition 

First Prize 

“The Code” 

Thia Paruchuru 

Instructor: Beth Matway 

Seminar in Composition: Gender Studies 

The Essay 

 

Honorable Mention 

“Stressing the Balance” 

Reid A. Frye 

Instructor: David Bartholomae 

Seminar in Composition 

The Essay 

 

Honorable Mention 

“My Anti-American Dream” 

Monica Yang 

Instructor: Angie Farkas 

Seminar in Composition 

The Essay 

 

Award for Excellence in Advanced Composition 

“Wildflowers” 

Diana Li 

Instructor: Ellen Smith 
Writing with Style 
The Essay 

 

2016/17 Committee of Judges: Beth Matway (Chair), Talitha Ikeda, Sam Pittman, Melssa Yang, & Janet Zellman

 

The 2016 Composition Program Writing Awards

First Prize

“What We Can Glean”

Ciara Kernan

Instructor: Ben Miller

Writing with Style

 

 

Second Prize

“A Mosaic of Hopelessly Broken Glass”

Farah Iman Muhd Najib

Instructor: Josh Zelesnick

Seminar in Composition

 

 

Third Prize

“Why They Aren’t Reading”

Samantha Bordman

Instructor: Ben Miller

Seminar in Composition: Education

The 2015 Composition Program Writing Awards 

First Place:

"Baking Lessons," by Emily McCartney-Leap

Freshman Seminar: Writing Food; Instructor: Sam Pittman

 

Second Place:

 “The Missing Tenor,” by Lillian Holt

Freshman Seminar: You are History; Instructor: Marylou Gramm

 

Third Place:

 “Healing,” by Rio Maropis

Seminar in Composition: Service Learning; Instructor: Angela Farkas

 

2015/16 Committee of Judges: Beth Matway (Chair), Janet Kafka, Josh Lupekas, Sam Pittman, Melissa Yang

The 2014 Composition Program Writing Awards

First Place: 

“Ladylike,” by Alexis Nasonti

Seminar in Composition; Instructor: Brenda Whitney

The Essay |
Commentary from the Judges

 

Second Place:

 “Rewrite History (We’ll Burn Bridges, You and I),” by Rikki Li

Seminar in Composition: Education; Instructor: Robin Clarke

The Essay | Commentary from the Judges

 

Third Place:

 “Perennials,” by Christopher LaFratte

Seminar in Composition; Instructor: John Trenz

The Essay | 
a href="/sites/default/files/2021-12/Third%20Place%20LaFratte%20Commentary.pdf">Commentary from the Judges

 

Third Place: 

“Modifying Reading and Writing Theories for the Writing Center: A Practical Guide for Tutors of ESL Students,” by Dara Liling

Theories of Writing and Teaching; Instructor: Paul Kameen

The Essay | 
< href="/sites/default/files/2021-12/Third%20Place%20Liling%20Commentary.pdf">Commentary from the Judges

 

2013/14 Committee of Judges: Paul Kameen (Chair), Samuel Pittman, Joshua Zelesnick, Melissa Yang

The 2013 Composition Program Writing Awards

First Place

“Choose Your Battles Wisely”
 by Alexis Donaldson, 
Seinar in Composition, 
Insructor: Janet Kafka

The Essay | 
Commentary from the Judges

 

Second Place

“Gay Men, Grindr, and the Gender Binary: a Tragic Love Story
 by Michael LeClaire, 
Seminr in Composition: Gender Studies, 
Instrutor: Beth Matway

The Essay | 
Commentary from the Judges

 

Second Place

“Am I Right or Am I Right”
 by Nora Fergany, 
Seminar n Composition: Honors, 
Instructo: David Bartholomae

The Essay | 
Commentary from the Judges

 

Third Place

“On the Body and Its Boundaries”
 by Lauren Muchnok, 
Seminar in omposition: Education, 
Instructor: obin Clarke

The Essay | 
Commentary from the Judges

 

2012/13 Committee of Judges: Paul Kameen (Chair), Lauren Campbell, Janine Carlock, Danielle Koupf, Mariolina Salvatori, and Justin Sevenker.

The 2012 Composition Program Writing Awards

First Place

“A Trip Through Perspective”
 by Shannon Kulig,
 Seminar in Composition, 
Instructor: Jenifer Howard

The Essay 
| Commentary from the Judges

 

Second Place

“The Meaning of Death”
 by Robert Wallace,
 Seminar in Composition, 
Instructor: Amada Giracca

The Essay 
| Commentary from the Judges

 

Second Place

“Press Pause” by Brittany Whoric,
 The Art of the Essay, 
Instructor: Jennfer Lee

The Essay 
| Commentary from the Judges

 

Honorable Mention

“Shades of Grey”
 by Alexis Cameron,
 Seminar in Composition, 
Instructor: NikkiCarroll

The Essay 
| Commentary from the Judges

 

2011/12 Committee of Judges: Paul Kameen, Mariolina Salvatori, 
Lauren Campbell, Dnielle Koupf, and Janine Carlock

The 2011 Composition Program Writing Awards

First Place

"Confessions of a Bibliophile" 
by Frederick Chen, Freshman Seminar: Ciizenry
, Instructor: Kristen Cosby

The Essay | 
Commentary from the Judges

 

Second Place

"Normality’s Fear: A Broken System" 
by Sihui Cassandra Chew
, Seminar in Composition: Gender Studies, 
Instructor: Elizabeth atway

The Essay | 
Commentary from the Judges

 

Honorable Mention

"Iron-Bound" 
by Kristin Vermilya, 
Intructor: Rosemary McMilen

The Essay | 
Commentary from the Judges

 

2010/11 Committee of Judges: Paul Kameen (Chair), 
Lauren Campbell, Trisha RedCampbell, Janet S. Kafka

The 2010 Composition Program Writing Awards

First Place

"Fighting a Winning Battle
 Enemy: Those Assumptions in which we are Drenched" 
by Emilia Wentworth
, Semina in Composition: Gender Studies, 
Instructor: Elizabeth Matway

 

The Essay 
| Commentary from the Judges

 

Second Place

"A Glimpse of Aggressive Gender
" by Mark Pelusi
, Seminar in Composition: Gender Studies, 
Instructor: Elizabeth Matway

The Essay 
| Commentary from the Judges

 

Honorable Mention

"Navigating Discourses
" by Suci Madjidji
, The Uses of Literacy
, Instructor: Elizabeth Matway

The Essay 
| Commentary from the Judges

  

2009/10 Committee of Judges: Paul Kameen (Chair)
, Steph Ceraso, Robin Deforest Clarke, Karl Hendricks, Janet S. Kafka, Stacey Waite

The 2009 Composition Program Writing Awards

FIRST PLACE

"Nowhere Man" 
by
 Dana Edmunds
, Seminar in Cmposition, 
Instructor: Usha Iyer

The Essay | 
Commentary from the Judges

 

Second PLACE

"The Journalist" 
by
 Emily Shelly, 
Seminar in Compsition, 
Instructor Joanna Collins

n

The Essay | 
Commentary from the Judges

 

Honorable Mention

"Music from the Life of Eugene Ivins" 
by
 Sarah Ivins
, Seminar in Compositin, 
Instructor: Dahliani Reynolds

n


The Essay | Commentary from the Judges

  

Honorable Mention

"Between Frequencies" 
by 
Kevin Progar
, Seminar in Compositio, 
Istructor: Molly Nichols

< href="/sites/default/files/2021-12/judges.progar.pdf">Commentary from the Judges

  

2008/09 Committee of Judges: Nicholas J. Coles (Chair)
, Steph Ceraso, Janet S. Kafka, Dahliani Reynolds, Uma Satyavolu, 
Joshua Schriftman, Ellen Smith

The 2008 Composition Program Writing Awards

FIRST PLACE (shared)

"On Dissociation" 
by
 Rachel Hutchinson, 
Seminar in Compositin: Service Learning, 
Intructor: Mark Kramer

The Essay 
| Commentary from the Judges

 

FIRST PLACE (shared)

"On Oscar Wilde, Posing as a Sodomite" 
by 
Amy Scarbrough
, Seminar in Composition
, Istrutor: Kelly Ramsey

The Essay 
| Commentary from the Judges

 

SECOND PLACE

"Why Then Should We Give?
" by
 Marie Pappas, 
Seminar in Composition, 
Instructor: Ellen Carill

The Essay 
| Commentary from the Judges

  

THIRD PLACE

"Viva la Vida" 
by 
Ariana Wallace, 
Seminar in Composition, 
Instrctor Jennifer Lee

r

The Essay 
| Commentary from the Judges

 

2007/08 Committee of Judges: Lois Williams (Chair), 
Don Bialostosky, Jamie Bianco, Ronna Edelstein, Hannah errard, Marylou Gramm, Janet S. Kafka

The 2007 Composition Program Writing Awards

FIRST PLACE

"Superhuman Chemo-Pee" 
by 
Chelsea Jones, 
Freshman Seminar, 
Instructor: ClareConnrs

<>The Essay 
| Commentary from the Judges  

 

 

SECOND PLACE

"Two Worlds" 
by 
Jayesh Madrecha, 
Seminar in Composition, 
Instructor: Dvid artholomae

r

The Essay Commentary from the Judges   

 

HONORABLE MENTION

"Kings Fallen: A Story of Lost Boys" 
by 
Megan Brannum, 
Seminar in Composition, 
Instructor: Beth Maway

 

The Essay 
| Commentary from the Judges 

 

HONORABLE MENTION

"A Narrative of the Life of Mary Jemison: 
A Cultural Baggage Tug-of-War" 
by 
Stephanie Leung
, Seminar in Comosition, 
Instructor: Jennifer Shell/p>

Commentary from the Judges    

 

2006-2007 Committee of Judges: Lois Williams (Chair), 
Nicholas J. Coles, Kristen Cosby, Deborah Galle, Marylou Gramm,
 Kistin Collins Hanley, Janet S. Kafka, Brenda Whitney

The 2006 Composition Program Writing Awards

FIRST PLACE

"Utterly Defeated, or Maybe Not"
 by 
Kelly Coburn
, Honors College Seminar in Composition, 
Instructor: Janet afka

The Essay | Commentary from the Judges    

 

SECOND PLACE

"The Dehumanization of 
Japanese Americans
" by 
Rachel Grubbs, 
Seminar in Composition, 
Instructo: Elizabeth Matway

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The Essay | Commentary from the Judges    

 

HONORABLE MENTION

"Plastic Surging 
(Or How Long Do We Have to Ride at Anchor Before Consciousness Kicks in)" 
by 
achel Nagelberg
, Seminar in Composition, 
Instructor: Brad Fest

a href="/sites/default/files/2021-12/judges.agelberg.pdf">Commentary from the Judges

 

HONORABLE MENTION

"Inside an Open Book: A Literacy Narrative" 
by 
Mary C. Zangrilli
, Instructor: Mariolina Salvatori

Commentary from the Judges  

 

2005-06 Committee of Judges: Deborah Galle (Chair)
, Nicholas J. Coles, Kristen Cosby, Jessica Enoch, Janet S. Kafka, Ryan Smith